" Build On Stories " (game over)
This game was destined to players of 10 to 100 years of age.
Welcome! As the name implies, people submit beginnings of stories that they made up, and then they post the story endings. The stories can be long or short, but there are rules.
RULES:
1: No inappropriate stories, or inappropriate stuff in general.
2: Come on once every week.
3: Don't go too off-topic. For example, don't come on and start talking about something weird like milk or cats or cats with milk.
4: Only take one slot, and use your real name unless you feel really self-conscious about revealing your real name.
5: The password for the visitor slot is 'password'. DO NOT CHANGE it.
6: Don't make the main character in the stories die.
7. The person who wrote the first piece of the story gets to end the story.
'Kay, that just about wraps it up! Tell me if I should add some buyables, and HAVE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!


1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 15:59 I welcome you with open arms!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 16:01 Random Guy: Hooves.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 16:01 Hooves, arms, whatever!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 17:44 [Note: That's an MLP: Cutie Markless Two-Parter--Part One reference. A Starlight Glimmer quote.]
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:53 Oh, hi, Euodia!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55  Rolling Item sided dice... Result=nothing  Hey, I decided to join because all your games are AWESOME!!!!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55 Hello
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55 :)
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55 So we just write stories here
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55 Do you have a story idea?
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:55 Basically
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:56 Yes I do
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:56 You put peices of stories in, and other people write other peices.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:57 Like that.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:58 It's about boarding high school in Europe
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:59 Cool
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 22:59 Idea I mean
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 22:59 You can put the already-written peice anywhere in your story. Like someone posts a story peice, and you put your additions before and after the peice that was already written.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:00 Um I have just few minutes left cause in Ghana it's 8:59 pm and I need to sleep *yawns*😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:00 Like this:
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Person 1: a
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Like what
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Huh
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Person 2: dag
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Like one person posts a, and the next person posts dag.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:01 Oookayyyy
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:03 So did you read what I wrote earlier
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:04 I really have to go so maybe see you in Ghana morning
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:04 Yes, the European school and that it's late in Ghana.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:04 Okay, night for you!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:08 Byeeeeee!!!!👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋🙋🏾🏡
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:08 Catch you in the morning
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:09  Secret message to Felicity  
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.20 23:10  Secret message to Euodia  
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.20 23:14 Thanks Felicity you're the best
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 02:03 I'm going to post my first story piece! bbbbbbbb"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 02:03 Oops....
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 02:04 And the story might take a while.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:27 Here's my first story peice! Although, it's meant to go at the beginning of a story.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:31 I woke up in the middle of the night. I tried to look at the clock on the floor next to my Japanese bed, but found that my neck would not turn. I tried to sit up, but on my chest was a weird monster thing!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:36 I thought that it was a Harpymon, but it seemed...off. It said, "Rikaaaaaa......I will destroy you for what Renamon did..." I couldn't move at all. I tried to yell for Renamon, but unfortunately couldn't.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:40 Then I remembered that she went back to the Digiworld as Viximon and in my head, I was like, "SHOOT!" Right before Harpymon tried to destroy me, I woke up in a cold sweat and sat up like a lightning bolt had surged through me.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:47 "Just sleep paralysis," I said to myself. "Just a dream." Apparently, my mom was all in my face. She said, "Happy birthday, Rika!" I glanced at my super-fancy clock, and it confirmed that it indeed was May 9, 2028, my thirteenth birthday.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 03:50 [Don't post anything, I'm going to bed. I'll continue in the morning.]
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.21 10:14 Thanks Felicity you're the best
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.21 10:17 Good Ghana morning everyone
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.21 10:23 My birthday is next month on the 17th
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 12:55 I told you not to post, Euodia!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:05 Anyway, here's the rest of my story piece:
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:41 Finally, she was here for my birthday. "Morning, Mom," I say. She leaves the room and I throw the covers aside.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:47 I do my morning rout, you know, school uniform, hair, blah blah blah, and then I headed to the dining room to find out that Grandma had made my favorite breakfast, aka miso soup. After finishing, I paid my bag, headed off to school, same old, same old.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:51 Six hours later, I headed home. I expected to see Renamon in the sakura tree that she always was sitting in when I got home from school, but she went back to the other side last October. "Really, Rika?! Seven months and you're STILL doing that?!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:54 After I scolded myself, I started running towards my house, but someone reached out of the forest and grabbed me around my mouth. I let out a muffled scream, and that someone pulled me into the forest.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:55 And...done! Build on it if you would like! And by the way, the system works like this:
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:55 Player 1: a
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:55 Player 2: dag
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:56 Player 3: Adagio
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 13:56 Yes, I planned that.
20>Visitor (Any non member), Anyyo.2015,Aug.21 15:12 OH WA OH, OH WA OH, YOU DIDN'T KNOW DAT YOU FE--
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 15:13 SHUT UP, YOU!! This isn't the CHS Battle of the Bands!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.21 15:14 [Note: That's an MLP Equestria Girls Rainbow Rocks reference. A song by the Dazzlings/the Sirens.]
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.21 19:21 {Note: I chosse not to reveal my true name}
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.21 19:21 {I love the RP alliance}
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.22 02:05 Welcome, Shimmer! Mind adding to my story peice?
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.22 16:51 Also: read ALL of the posts before you add on.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 01:29 It carried me a long distance into the woods. Whatever it was, I was afraid to find out.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 01:30 It stopped by a stream.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 01:32 It moaned at me, "Riiiiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaa, you are despised amongst the races. You shall be destroyed for what Renemon did''
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 01:32 Then it dissapered into the woods, leaving no trace that it had ever been there.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:38 Nice story peice, Shimmer.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:38 I'll continue it.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:42 I stood there for about two minutes pondering what that thing was. Was it a Deva? Was it the D'Reaper? Suddenly, I had a huge burst of curiosity and anger all at once. "Who are you?! What are you doing?!" Then I realized that Renamon wasn't here.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:48 I ran back to my house, where my mom and grandmother were apparently worried sick about me. They hugged me ever-so-tight when I walked through the door, and for a moment, I felt like crying. Grandma said, "What happened?"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:52 I responded, "A monster harassed me, pulled me into the forest and threatened to destroy me." Mom asked, "Was it a Digimon?" I replied, "I think so." As I sat down on the couch, a tear trickled down my face. My soft side showing through again.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.23 02:53 There! Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 18:06 ''do not cry'', my mom said.''how can I stop crying'', I said. I knew they were right, this had happened to my mom before. It was like an ancestral thing. I shivered just thinking about it. just then my brother came in. he knew nothing.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 18:07 ''hey mom can i get some ice-cream?'', he said. ''Sure honey, it's in the freezer.'',
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.23 18:07 that's all
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 00:43 Adding on...
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 00:53 Then I remembered that I don't have a brother. I must have been hallucinating. Maybe the weird Digimon cursed me. "Rika, are you okay?" I snapped out of it and responded to my mother. "Yea, I'm okay." I went to my room and changed out of my uniform.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 00:58 I flopped on my bed, and immediately, 're
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 01:04 *I got hit in the head with a frying pan or something. I stood up, trying to figure out what was going on, but somehow, I got hit again. I couldn't stand up anymore, and I started to fall over. I hit the ground, and everything went dark.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 01:05 Done!
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:12 I drift in and out of conciousness
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:13 I dream dreams of monster, digimons, and other creatures of the dark.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:14 My dreams end with a Deva, slowly rumbling tword me\
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:14 I try to escape, but I am glued to my spot
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:14 I can only watch as the Deva grows closer.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.24 01:14 (DONE!!)
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 02:56 I thought, "This is no way to be spending my birthday, possibly unconscious while about to be attacked. I HATE THIS!" Suddenly, I woke up in some lab. A girl was sitting in a chair beside where I laid. She said, "Good. It's about time that you woke up."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:02 I responded, my voice cracking, "Who are you? Why am I here?" She said, "Relax, Rika. All you need to know right now is that I am Sakura, ad you will soon be in a much better place than Shinjuku."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:06 I yelled, still lying down, "What do you mean, 'a better place?' And how do you know my name?" Sakura said, "You don't need to know any of this! Just eat this single little peice of candy and you will find out for yourself."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:10 She had an evil smile plastered across her face, and I didn't exactly trust her. She held out a little peice of candy that looked like saltwater taffy. I wasn't sure if I should have trusted her or not, but I took the candy anyway.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:14 I hesitantly gulped it down and immediately realized that it was NOT candy. I sat up like I had that morning after I had that nightmare. Sakura gave me a glass of water to get the thing's bitter taste out of my mouth, and I gulped it down fast.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:19 I suddenly felt like I was falling and drifted into unconsciousness again. I started floating through the universe, with Beelzemon attacking me, and Renamon, once again, was not there. I yelled, "WHERE'S RENAMON WHEN YOU NEED HER?!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:20 Then Beelzemon vaporized and everything disappeared again, but this time, in a blinding white light.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.24 03:21 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 00:20 I had to do something fast but I was helpless there was nothing I could do. Suddenly everything became clear and I could see better. I saw a woman with a peice of something that looked liked chocolate. As I got closer I realised it was not chocolate.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 00:28 It was a brown wood. ''Welcome Rika, we've been waiting'', she said. I couldn't see anyone else there. Suddenly, two men appeared. ''Who are you. GET AWAY FROM ME!'', I shouted. Then I couldn't hear my own voice. WHAT WAS HAPPENING? Then I woke up. (DONE)
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:20 Continuing.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:23 I was in the same lab that I was before. I saw a blurry blob right above me. "Rika," the blob said. "Rika, it's me." There was a clock on the wall that said the date along with the time, and I was relieved to see that it was still my 13th birthday.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:28 The voice sounded familiar, but it wasn't Sakura. "R-Renamon?" I said. The blob said, "Yes." "Renamon, it's really you!" I responded. I reached out to hug her, but my hand went straight through her, then she disappeared. I was devastated. "Renamon?"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:42 Sakura emerged from the shadows, and I sat up. She said, "Ha! You fell for my HOLOGRAM! The real Renamon is right there!" She pointed to a jail-style prison block where Renamon was asleep in. Then she bolted upright. She must have been having a nightmare.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:45 Then I gathered enough strength to stand up. I exclaimed, "How dare you knock me unconscious and turn my birthday into a personal tug-of-war!" I ran after her, screaming "AAAAH!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 03:46 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 10:00 She turned and I suddenly I stopped in mid-air. ''LET ME GO!!!!'', I said. She laughed and said ''SHUT UP RIKA!!''. I became unconscious. I was tied of getting dizzy. Then I was home again.this time home alone. There was a knock on the door. When I opened
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 10:03 I saw someone who gave me the shock of my life. The person was ....( Done but please make the person scary)
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 13:25 Continuing.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 13:34 I woke up before I could see who it was. I was wrapped in vines, for some reason. Then I saw why. There was a Palmon right there. I struggled to escape, but every time I moved, or tried to move, the vines coming from her "hands" just got tighter!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 13:49 Renamon yelled from the jail cell, "Stay strong, Rika! There is a forcefield around the jail cell, and I cannot help you this time!" I said, straining, "It's alright, I'll find a way!" I pulled my arms out of the vines.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:04
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:11 The Palmon squeezed my body tightly, and I flailed my legs aound wildly, but my arms were free, so I grabbed the vines and tried to pull them off. It was clear that the Palmon was going through a LOT of PAIN, so she let go.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:18 Then Sakura pulled out a black D-Power. "Digi-Modify! Snimon Twin Sicles activate!" Immediately, I realized that Sakura was a Digimon Tamer, like me. When the Palmon fired, I ducked and pressed my back against the forcefield that was trapping Renamon.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:28 It shattered the forcefield and put a hole in the jail cell walls. Renamon couldn't escape, though, because the hole was too small. I found some rope and tied the Palmon and Sakura up in the basement of the lab and locked them in there.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:31 I somehow pulled the bars down and enabled Renamon to escape. As we went back to my house, I said, "You are the best birthday present ever."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:31 THE END!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 14:31 Looks like we're done with that story!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 20:54 I want buy-ables and I have at story ice a. Shimmer if you have some say it and we will see who goes first
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 20:56 I meant a story idea
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 20:56 Huh?
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 20:56 Oh!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 20:57 Post your story idea!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 20:59 My story is called a day at the fun fair or amusement park
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 21:01 Hey felicity stay online for the rest of the time cause I need to charge my iPad so when it's full I will use it
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 21:01 Come on, post the piece!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 21:03 Wait for it to charge pleeeaaaasssseeee
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 21:03 Ok
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 21:04 Wait, what percent is your iPad?
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.26 21:12 Never mind.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:44 Wait for it to charge pleeeaaaasssseeee
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:44 It's 79 percent
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:45 Okay the piece
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:51 ''Hurry up, we'll be late!'' My sister cried. We were going to a fun fair at the amusement park. I sat in the car and we set off. We reached and I got down from the car. ''Stacey!'', someone shouted. I turned around and saw my friend Kendra. '
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:55 ''Mom I'll be back.'', I said. When I came back I couldn't find my mom. I called her on my cellphone but she didn't reply. I began a frantic search but to no avail. I sat on a pony ride and cried
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:56 ''Hey are you gonna pay or not. I ain't got time.'', a man shouted. I got up
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.26 22:56 DONE
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.30 23:10 Continuing.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.30 23:18 I started wandering around when I bumped into someone. She had short red hair and green eyes. She was wearing a purple tee, khakis and black sneakers. She also had on a blue watch. I fell over, picked myself up and dusted myself off.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.30 23:22 She asked, "Are you okay?" I responded, "Yea, I'm okay. You?" She said, "Uh-huh." There was an awkward silence. She asked, "So, uh, what's your name?" I responded, "Stacey." She said, "Kimberly. Kimberly Ann. But you can just call me Kim."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.30 23:24 She asked, "Where are your parents? I answered, "See, that's the thing. Can't find them. I'm lost. Can you help me find them?" Kim responded, "Sure!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Aug.30 23:24 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:34 Continuing
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:36 Little did I know she was part of a group who stole people with high IQ's moms.( A little about that later)
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:41 ( I promised to tell you, so here it goes, the AHIQK, short form for association of higher IQ kids, is a group of very intelligent kids. But the ALMK, short for the association of lower minded kids , hated us. They vowed to capture our parents. )
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:42 ( they had already taken FIVE children' s parents)
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:46 Kim said, '' Show me where you were. '' I led her to where Kendra was
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 10:46 DONE
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Aug.31 11:18 DONE
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:08 Continueing
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:10 "this is where my friend was. I called to my mom, saying I was leaving to go with her.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:11 When my mom didn't reply, I searched for her. I did everything I could to find her."
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:11 I told her.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:11 She replied, 'Wow, how strange! Did you call the police?"
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:11 {GTG}
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.3 19:12 DONE
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:14 Continuing!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:18 I replied, "No." Then I remembered that I knew someone named Kimberly Ann and looked exactly like this Kimberly Ann. But there was something...off about this one. Something sinister, something cruel. I reassured myself that it was all just in my head.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:21 Kim asked, "Why?" I answered, "Because my phone died right after I tried to call Mom." Then I heard from behind me, "Wait! Stop! She's not the real Kim!" I whipped around to find the Kimberly Ann that looked right, that felt right.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:24 The real Kim yelled, "She's an impostor!" The fake Kim strutted right up to the real Kim and said, "I thought I got rid of you!" The real Kim yelled back, "You threw me in a broom closet!" The fake Kim responded, "I locked the door!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:29 The real Kim exclaimed, "It opens from the inside, too, you know!" The fake Kim said, "Really?" I got all up in the fake Kim's face and said, "Wait a sec, did you steal my mom?" Fake Kim said nervously, "What? No! She did!" and pointed to the real Kim.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:33 I rolled my eyes and yelled, "Yea, right!" The fake Kim said, "I'm the real Kim Palmia!" I ignored her and walked up to the real Kim and said, "C'mon, KP. Let's go." We started to walk away when the fake Kim pounced.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:34 We struggled to turn over to face her, but when we did, she yelled, "I will destroy you, BOTH of you!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.3 19:34 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.4 10:50 Quick pause: do you think we should award points to the best writer every week?
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.4 17:30 Well, after each story, I will award 25 Creativeness points to the author who wrote the most interesting story piece in the story. For the Rika story, that is...
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.4 17:32   + 25 Creativeness points to Euodia  EUODIA! The most interesting piece was when Rika stopped in midair, written by Euodia. Congrats!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.5 15:11 Aw hank you . I am shy
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.5 15:11 i meant thank you
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:37 Continueing:
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:37 I tried to scream, but her hand quickly muffled my mouth.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:38 I bit it, in an attempt to loosen her grip.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:39 The real Kim yells to me "Turn away!"
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:39 I do so, wondering what's going on.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:40 As I turn, out of the corner of my eye, I see the real Kim dissaper in a flash of light, only to reapper as a red firebird.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:40 The fake Kim turned to face her.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:40 When she saw the creature, she cried, "Emily, stop!"
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.7 01:40 DONE
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.7 16:03 "Emily," the firebird said. "My name is not Emily, nor is it Kim Palmia. My real name is Kim Phoenix, and this is my true form. I shall destroy you, Cara." I said, puzzled, "The fake Kim's name is Cara?" Kim said, "Yes."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.7 16:07 Kim had a weird double voice as a phoenix, like Queen Chrysalis from MLP in her true form. Kim took the opportunity to get me out of harm's, or should I say, Cara's, way. She showered fire on Cara, but simultaneously, got me with the fire as well.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.7 16:09 I started to fall backward, and all of a sudden, everything went dark.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.7 16:10 Done! Although, Euodia should do the next prompt, and it should be the end of the story.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.8 01:22 I will not be able to come on frequently because of school.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.9 23:28 Me too
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 20:57 Continueing
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 21:01 '' Hello, EARTH TO STACEY! '', Suddenly, I was back at the funfair, with my friend Kendra. She was shouting at me. ''Stace, were you daydreaming?'',
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 21:01 '' Yeah , sort of.''. I said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 21:03 '' Well then snap out of it! We are next in line for the cliffhanger ride.''
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 21:04 As I went on the ride, I sat back and smiled. Time to enjoy myself.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.10 21:04 THE END
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.10 21:21 Wow, that's cool! She was just dreaming? Awesome story!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.10 21:24 And the Amazing Piece Prize goes to Shimmer, for her piece where the real Kim turns into a phoenix. Hats off to you, Shimmer!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.10 21:25   + 25 Creativeness points to Shimmer  Congrats!
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.11 01:12 {can i start the next prompt/}
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.11 03:29 Of course!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.11 20:02 Shimmer we are waiting.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.13 19:28 "Come on!" My mischevious brother yelled. "We are going to be late for the circus"
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.13 19:28 My mother walked daintily beside me, holding her parasol high in the air.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.13 19:29 I longed to run after my brother, but the layers of petticoats stilfled me, not allowing me to mave more than a step at a time
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.13 19:31 "Dear." mother said, noticing that look in my eyes I get when my brother can to something I can't.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.13 19:31 [DONE}
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 20:59 Continuing
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:11 Mom can I take I take of the petticoat?", No, you look stunning in it. Besides it's cold.", mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:12 But Terry is not wearing a jacket.'', I said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:14 '' He is a boy and if you removed it the style of the dress will spoil ", mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:15 '' urhhhhhhh.", I growled.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:16 '' Hah, serves you right. Girls have to su-", brother was interrupted by mother.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:18 '' And shut up Terry, you're lucky you don't have a jacket. Tomorrow we are going to the shop to buy one.", mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:19 '' Noooooooo , I don't want one " Terry said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:19 '' Huh, see who is talking.", I chuckled.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.14 21:20 DONE!!!!!!
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.15 21:27 I started to drift off into my own dreamland world, like I do a lot. I was imagining that Terry was in the freezing Massachusetts Bay Colony snow and begging for a jacket, meanwhile Mother was saying, "No, you didn't want one, now come along."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.15 21:31 I imagined that she added, "And be quick about it!" I giggled at the idea. I was lost in my own fantasy-land, so I didn't see the rock I tripped over. My mother caught me and said, "Do be careful, dear, as you'll rip the dress!"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.15 21:35 I responded, "Terribly sorry, Mother, I was off in my own world."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.15 21:35 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:33 Continuing
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:36 '' I don't care, just make sure you don't rip the dress'', mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:37 here we go again, I thought, mother was going to start to lecture us on how hard the economy is.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:39 '' You know since dad died, the money's hard and the economy is very difficult.'' Mother began.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:40 '' Yes mother, I know.'', I said
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:41 '' So if I get you something, take care of it like a fresh egg elsr no more clothes.'', Mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:42 ''Yes mother we will.'', Terry and I said at the sametime.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:44 '' Good, now come along and let's go or we'll be late'', Mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 00:44 DONE
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:00 I said to my mother, "Mother, if the America wins its independence from Britain, do you think the economy would improve?" Mother sighed and responded, "I don't know, Sarah, and it doesn't look like America is going to win the war in the first place."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:05 I said, "But Mother, it's too soon to tell. It's only January 1777. The war started up just last year." Mother snapped, "Don't talk back to me. While your arguement might turn out to be true, it probably isn't."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:09 Terry called to us, "Hurry! We'll be late to the circus!" But then, we all suddenly stopped because a blinding light had appeared in front of us. We heard an explosion noise, and the light faded.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:13 Right there in front of us was a boy and a girl who looked about my age, 15, and were wearing strange clothes. The girl had long black hair, green eyes and tan skin. The boy had Terry's hair in brown, blue eyes and pale skin.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:16 Both of them were in contrast to the family color scheme of ginger-colored hair, brown eyes and skin almost as white as snow. But neither of the 'light children' was wearing a jacket. The girl opened her eyes, shook her head rapidly and ran up towards us.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.20 14:18 Done! Just so you know, they're from the future and you get to decide what they say.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:38 Hi
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:40 Continuing
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:43 " Out of my way losers!", the boy shouted and they ran past us.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:45 "See how the British children act? They have no respect for the elderly of America.", mother said.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:46 " Terry, where are you?", I suddenly realized that Terry was not there.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:47 I spotted him at the other side of the road.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:48 " Come back here this minute!!!!", mother shouted.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:49 " No mother, you will make me late." , Terry yelled back.
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:52 Mother held my hand and said," Run to the other side of the road."
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:53 When we reached there, she scolded him. "Don't you ever do that again!"
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:53 DONE!!!!
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 16:57 Oo! I'm continueing it!
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 17:02 The same blinding light appeared, and in front of us, there was a girl who looked almost just like me, except for her clothes and how my hair only reaches to just below my shoulders and hers was waist-length. She looked 16, maybe 17.
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 17:09 She said, "Sorry about those two, they're my siblings and they're both jerks. Seriously! Kim! Ron! Come! Here! Right! NOW!" The two 'jerks' came across the road, and 'Kim' slapped my doppelganger in the face.
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 17:17 'Ron' snapped, "Seriously, Skylar, you don't have to be so mean!" Skylar said, "Whatever. Anyway, guys, you've got to listen to me!" We stared at Skylar blankly, and she said, "You have to listen to me. Anyway, the war is too dangerous."
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 17:18 Kim said, "You have to come with us to the future!"
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 17:18 Done!
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 22:06 Hi Mystery, check out the roleplay called ''THE ROLEPLAY ALLIANCE''.
7>Mystery (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 22:07  Secret message to Euodia  
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 22:14  Secret message to Mystery  
2>Euodia (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.20 22:16 DARN IT
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.26 23:09 "Why?" i asked
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.26 23:10 "The present seems fine enough to me."
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.26 23:11 "If you hold us up one more minute, I am calling the deputy. Seiriously, treating your elders ths way!" my mom said
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:24 "Never mind your elders. If you stay here, you might die. 1777 is too dangerous. 2015 is much safer. You have to come with us," Ron said. Kim added, "Don't worry, it's completely safe and it doesn't hurt."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:29 "Witchcraft! Absolute witchcraft!" I muttered under my breath. "I heard that!" Skylar snapped. "You are coming to the future. End of story! I'll explain once we get there..or...then...or something...you get the point."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:35 Kim pulled a staff out of the bag that she wore on her back. She lifted it into the sky with both hands, and the other ones wrapped one of their hands around the base near Kim's hands. Ron used his left, and Skylar used her right.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:39 "2015 Time Transport!" the siblings exclaimed in unison. A bright white light grew from the upwards tip of the bright blue sapphire on the top end of the staff, and it engulfed all of us in its warmth. The ground beneath us disappeared.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:42 We fell into a pitch-black chamber, and I shrieked with fear. After about ten seconds, we fell out of the chamber and into a big pool of water.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.27 01:42 Done!
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.27 19:11 I yelled until my throught grew horse.
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.27 19:12 "witchcraft! Murder! Magic! Demons!" I yelled
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.27 19:12 Then I saw that we were in a long hallway. I ran to the end, opened the door and escaped
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.28 17:34 Skylar ran after me. She's a lot faster than me. She grabbed my hand and assured me that everything would be fine. I dropped to the ground, cold with the water that had seeped through my clothes and my hair.
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.28 17:38 "The water that you fell into was a jacouzzi, which is like an indoor swimming pond. This is the family room, and my bedroom is upstairs," Skylar said. Then she called to Kim, "Kim, is it okay if Sarah borrows some of your clothes?"
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.28 17:38 Kim said, "Yea, fine."
1>Felicity (Writer), 11yo.2015,Sep.28 17:38 Done!
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:28 I wanted to punch the witchs
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:28 Kim came in with some clothes
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:29 "Why do these reveal parts of me that are the reason you have clothes?" I yelled, "Get me some petticoats!"
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:30 I ran out the door again
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:32 This time none of the witches chased me. I ran until I got to a sheriff's office. "Deputy!" I yelled, "Send out a witch hunting hunt!" He calmed me down, and took me to his house. At 3:00, the witches broke into his house. He arrested them promptly, and
3>Shimmer (Writer), 10yo.2015,Sep.29 01:33 locked them in a cell until they could be tried. "I hoped the verdict Is hanging!" my brother yelled!

   
       
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